OOC: CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM

[onlensreflex]

How's my driving? How can I improve with Ash and Pukamon? Yes, they're original characters, but are they consistent, believable, etc? How do they come across?

Also: How is my cultural understanding? I'm not Australian nor of British descent, nor have I spent any time in Japan; while I've worked at Disney I wasn't DPI. If I've gotten something wrong, I'd love to know.

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